A conversation with my guide where he gave some interesting insights on things that could be improved.
Instead of full bottles, look at the distinctive caps of each. Or things they are drunk with like straws, or different types of glasses. Try a different style perhaps, not so scribbly.
In the bharat logo a negative space between the two languages might work.
The word for each solution should be re-looked at, it should fit perfectly. There are numerous words which may fit, but try to find that ideal one that relates to both ’solution’ and ‘design’.
The copy for ‘develop’ needs to be re-looked at. ‘Avoid widows and orphans’ is anti-social and controversial statement at the first glance.
In the envelope the illsutration on the top is a bit messy at first glance and can be much simpler, or more orderly. Its almost the face of the envelope.
The ‘design solution’ can be better designed, or removed if not needed.
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